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[연재 40회] KPA - 잘못 작성된 사례

글쓴이 복진요 작성일 2008.01.21 00:00 조회수 1701 추천 0 스크랩 0
□ 사례 10 - 허리 받침대를 구비한 등받이 - ▶분야 : 화학(일반생활) ▶기술내용 : 착석자의 허리를 받쳐줄 수 있도록 함으로써, 착석 시 항상 허리를 편안하게 받쳐줄 수 잇도록 하는 허리 받침대를 구비한 등받이 ▶TITLE ○작성내용 : BACKPLATE WITH WAIST SUPPORT CAPABLE OF SUPPORTING USER'S WASTE ㆍ발명의 일반적인 특징을 나타내지만 보다 특징적인 내용이 미비 ○수정내용 : BACKPLATE WITH WAIST SUPPORT, IN WHICH BACKPLATE SUPPORTING USER'S BACK AND WAIST SUPPORT PLATE SUPPORTING USER'S WAIST ARE INSTALLED ㆍ발명의 특징을 보다 구체적인 내용으로 설명 ▶PURPOSE ○작성내용 : A backplate with a waist support is provided, which is able to support user's waist separated from the backplate in case that a user totally leans on the backplate of a chair and which always supports the user's waist comfortably whenever the user sits on the chair. ㆍ문장이 너무 산만하여 발명의 목적을 파악하는데 어려움 ○수정내용 : A backplate with a waist support is provided to support a user's waist when a user leans on the backplate of a chair and to always support the user's waist comfortably when the user sits on the chair. ㆍ발명이 이루고자 하는 기술적 과제를 간결하게 표현하여 발명의 목적내용을 명확하게 함 ▶CONSTITUTION ○작성내용 : The backplate with a waist support includes a vertical support plate(100), a first vertical extension plate(110), a second vertical extension plate(111), a first backplate(120), a second backplate(121), a first horizontal extension plate(130), a second horizontal extension plate(131), a first waist support plate(140) and a second waist support plate(141). ㆍ본 발명의 특징인 구성요소를 나열 했을 뿐 구체적인 구성요소간의 연결 관계가 나타나지 않음 ○수정내용 : The backplate with a waist support includes a vertical support plate(100), a first vertical extension plate(110), a second vertical extension plate(111), a first backplate(120), a second backplate(121), a first horizontal extension plate(130), a second horizontal extension plate(131), a first waist support plate(140) and a second waist support plate(141). The first and second horizontal extension plates(130,131) are formed to extend from both lower sides of the vertical support plate(100). The first and second waist support plates(140,141) are installed at the ends of the first and second extension plates(130,131). ㆍ본 발명의 특징인 중요한 구성요소(support plate)를 구체적으로 다른 구성요소와 연결시켜 나타내고 있음
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