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□ 사례 15 - 공동주택의 옥외배관 방범시설 - ▶분야 : 기계(정밀기계) ▶기술내용 : 공동주택의 옥외배관을 통해 침입을 시도할 경우 경보등과 함께 침입자에게 형광색소를 포함으로써 침입을 방지하는 시설 ▶title ○작성내용 : security apparatus for covering outdoor pipe capable of protecting burglar ○수정 내용 : capable of protecting burglar-> capable of preventing intrusion using outdoor pipe ·방지한다는 의미에 protect를 사용했으며, 옥외배관을 통한 침입에 대한 것임이 나타나 있지 않음 ▶purpose ○작성내용 : a security apparatus for covering outdoor pipe is provided to protect burglar by spraying fluorescent paint on an intruder and by turning on light. ○수정내용 : an outdoor pipe security apparatus of an apartment house is provided to prevent a burglar from intruding by spraying fluorescent paint on the burglar and turning on the light. ·제목에서와 동일하게 to protect burglar라고 썼으며, 문맥상 같은 의미인 intruder와 burglar를 다른 뜻인 것처럼 사용했음 ▶constitution ○작성내용 : a container(32) is straightly formed in a rear portion of a body(31) in order to wrap up an outdoor pipe(20). a contain space unit(33) for flexible unit(40) is formed in front portion of the body. a fixing x-frame(30) is installed on an outer wall(10). the flexible unit is attached to the contain space unit in order to spray fluorescent paint through a nozzle(45). a front cover(50) is formed in front portion of a fixing x-frame(30). a driving unit(60) controls movement of the flexible unit in a guide groove(53) of the front cover. plural springs(70) are constantly arranged in the guide groove. the spring enables the driving unit to elastic force for recovering up to a start position. a lamp unit(80) is implemented in front portion of the fixing x-frame, and implemented a lamp(82) for blanking according to control of the driving unit. ○수정내용 : a container(32) is vertically formed on the rear portion of a body(31) in order to enclose an outdoor pipe. a containing space(33) for a bellows member(40) is formed on the front portion of the body. a fixing x-frame(30) is installed on an outer wall. the bellows member is attached to the containing space in order to spray fluorescent paint through a nozzle(45). a front cover(50) is formed on the front portion of the fixing x-frame. a driving unit(60) controls the movement of the bellows member in a guide groove(53) of the front cover. plural springs(70) are arranged at certain intervals in the guide groove. the spring applies elastic force for recovering the driving unit to the initial position. a lamp unit(80) is implemented in the front portion of the fixing x-frame, and includes a lamp(82) blanking according to the control of the driving unit. ·선정된 대표도에 표기되지 않은 (10),(20) 도면번호를 사용했음 ·자바라 부재를 flexible unit 으로 썼음-> bellows member가 맞는 표현 ·the spring enables the driving unit to elastic force for recovering up to a start position. -> enable to v 형식에서 동사가 빠져있으며, 문장의 의미를 이해하기 어려움