데이터베이스연구회

□ 사례 17 - 차량의 도난 경보방법 및 그 시스템 - ▶분야 : 기계(일반기계) ▶기술내용 : 차량외부의 충격이나, 문 열림 감지시 차량에 장착되어 있는 경음기를 이용하여 도난경보음을 발생하는 차량의 도난 경보방법과 그 시스템 ▶title ○작성내용 : burlar alarming method of a vehicle and a system of the same for reducing manufacturing and installation cost by using a horn mounted on the vehicle without an additional alarming device ○수정내용 : method for forming thin insulation x-layer in magnetic memory device, especially for preventing a part of the x-layer from being excessively thinned ·preventing generation of locally excessively thinning phenomenon 명세서에 기재된 ‘국부적인 과도한 얇아짐 현상의 발생’을 직역함으로써 표현이 어색해졌음 ▶purpose ○작성내용 : a burglar alarming method of a vehicle and a system of the same are provided to inform than the vehicle is stolen by driving a horn installed on the vehicle when a shock is applied to the vehicle from the outside or a door is opened. ○수정내용 : a method and system for burglar alarm in a vehicle are provided to utilize a horn installed in the vehicle rather than to install an additional horn for a burglar alarm. ·명세서의 단어를 단어 그대로 번역하기 보단, 전체적인 의미와 목적 위주로 작성하는 것이 바람직 ▶constitution ○작성내용 : a burglar alarming method of a vehicle drives a horn mounted on the vehicle when a shock signal from the outside os sensed or a door is opened, and informs that the vehicle is stolen. a burglar alarming system of a vehicle comprises a shock sensing unit(10), an opened door sensing unit(20), a key input unit, a micro computer(40), a current control unit(50). ○수정내용 : a burglar alarm using the existing horm of a vehicle comprises a shock sensor which detects shock imposed on the vehicle, a door opening sensor which detects opening of a door, keys which allows to choose level of sound volume and tone of the horn, a microcomputer which emits control signals based on the key input when door is opened or shock is sensed. ·a burglar alarming method of a vehicle drives a horn mounted on the vehicle 방법이 경음기를 구동한다는 어색한 표현 ·각 센서 및 유닛등 구성요소들의 기능이 누락되어 있음