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[연재 51회] KPA - 잘못 작성된 사례

글쓴이 복진요 작성일 2008.01.23 00:00 조회수 1542 추천 0 스크랩 0
□ 사례 21 - 배터리용 제어장치 - ▶분야 : 전기전자(제어) ▶기술내용 : 배터리의 충전 또는 방전을 정확하게 제어할 수 있는 배터리용 제어장치를 제공하기 위하여 필요한 배터리 품종마다 제어 파라미터를 기억한 보존용 메모리를 구비시킴으로써 고가인 메모리를 사용하지 않아도 됨 ▶TITLE ○작성내용 : CONTROL DEVICE FOR BATTERY INCLUDING MEMORY UNIT IN WHICH CONTROL PARAMETERS OF VARIOUS BATTERY PRODUCTS ARE STORED ○수정내용 : CONTROL DEVICE FOR BATTERY INCLUDING MEMORY UNIT FOR MEMORIZING CONTROL PARAMETERS ·기억수단은 제어파라미터를 기억하는데 쓰이는데, 작성자는 제어 파라미터가 기억수단에 저장되어 있다고 기술 --> 저장되어 있는 현상보다 기억수단의 용도가 더 중요한 표현임 ▶PURPOSE ○작성내용 : Provided is a control device for a battery, which allows precise control of charge or discharge of various kinds of battery products including batteries mounted to golf carts, and avoids a need for an expensive high-capacity memory. ○수정내용 : Provided is a control device for a battery, which does not need to memorize control order for controlling charge or discharge in memory unit according to sorts of batteries, and memorizes just control parameters required to control charge or discharge of the battery in case of using the battery of a new sort of battery. ·배터리용 제어장치의 단순한 향상점을 기술하였음. 향상내역 누락 ▶CONSTITUTION ○작성내용 : The control device(2) for a battery comprises: a memory unit(40) in which controls parameters required for controlling the charge, discharge or charge/discharge of each of various kinds of battery products(5) are stored; and a control unit(43) for constructing a control sequence for the batteries by using the control parameters and controlling the batteries according to the control sequence. The control device further comprises a characteristic information transmission unit for outputting the control parameters of each battery product and a characteristic information reception unit for receiving the signals of the control parameters transmitted from the characteristic information transmission unit, wherein the memory unit stores the control parameters received by the characteristic information reception unit. ○수정내용 : The control device(2) for a battery comprises: a memory unit(40) which memorizes control parameters of battery products(5) for controlling at least one of charge, discharge of the batteries; and a control unit(43) for constructing a control sequence for the batteries by using the control parameters and controlling the batteries according to the control sequence. The control device further comprises a characteristic information transmission unit for outputting the control parameters of each battery product and a characteristic information reception unit for receiving the signals of the control parameters transmitted from the characteristic information transmission unit, wherein the memory unit stores the control parameters received by the characteristic information reception unit. ·a memory unit의 역할을 쓰지 않음 --> 단지 저장되어 있는 단순 표현 사용. 상기 memory unit는 제어 파라미터를 단순 저장하는 것 보다 제어 파라미터를 기억하는 데 더 의미를 둘 수 있음
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