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[연재 54회] KPA - 잘못 작성된 사례

글쓴이 복진요 작성일 2008.01.24 00:00 조회수 1706 추천 0 스크랩 0
□ 사례 24 - 바형 핸드폰의 한 부분을 접는 핸드폰의 구조 - ▶분야 : 전기전자(통신) ▶기술내용 : 바형 핸드폰을 연결된 두 부분으로 분리하여 간단한 손 조작으로 송화기가 있는 부분이 사용자의 입에 근접하게 접히게 함으로써, 마이크 감도가 높아서 발생하는 주변잡음의 문제점을 완화 ▶TITLE ○작성내용 : STRUCTURE OF A BAR TYPE CELLULAR PHONE WHOSE PART IS FOLDABLE, CONCERNED WITH MAKING ONE PART OF THE BAR TYPE CELLULAR PHONE BE FOLDED AND POSITIONED NEAR THE MOUTH OF A USER WHEN A CALL CONVERSATION IS MADE ○수정내용 : STRUCTURE OF A CELLULAR PHONE FOLDING ONE PORTION OF A BAR TYPE CELLULAR PHONE, ESPECIALLY CONCERNED WITH ENABLING A USER TO MAKE A CALL IN A LOW VOICE BY MAKING ONE PORTION OF THE BAR TYPE CELLULAR PHONE BE FOLDED AND POSITIONING A TRANSMITTER NEARBY THE MOUTH OF A USER ·통화 시 한쪽 부분을 접어 입에 가까운 곳에 송화기가 위치하게 되어 작은 목소리로 통화가 가능한 것 ▶PURPOSE ○작성내용 : A structure of a bar type cellular phone whose part is foldable is provided to alleviate a problem of damaging surrounded persons because a distance between the mouth of a user and a voice transmitter and then a user cries in a loud voice and to reduce a surrounded noise caused by high sensitivity of a microphone. ○수정내용 : A structure of a cellular phone folding one portion of a bar type cellular phone is provided to enable a user to make a call in a low voice due to positioning a transmitter nearby the mouth of a user by separating the bar type cellular phone with two parts which are connected to each other. ·목적 항에 기술된 기존 바형 핸드폰의 문제점 기술이 장황함. 간단히 요약하고 이러한 문제점을 구체적으로 어떤 방법을 통하여 개선이 가능하였는지 발명의 효과와 주목적이 없음 ▶CONSTITUTION ○작성내용 : A structure of a bar type cellular phone whose part is foldable comprises a support member and a link unit. The support member is adhered to the cellular phone in which a voice receiver is separated from a voice transmitter such that the voice transmitter and the voice receiver are foldable. The link unit converts a linear movement into a rotational movement. By using the support member and the link unit, the voice receiver is folded when the voice receiver moves in a reverse direction. ○수정내용 : A structure of a cellular phone folding one portion of a bar type cellular phone comprises a supporting member and a link unit. A transmitter is separated from a receiver such that the transmitter and the receiver are foldable by the supporting member which is adhered to the cellular phone. The link unit converts a linear movement into a rotational movement. By using the supporting member and the link unit, the receiver is folded when the receiver moves in a reverse direction of the supporting member. ·지지대와 링크장치로 구성. 지지대와 링크장치 각각의 역할 설명 되어야 함. 지지대의 역할에 대한 설명 부족->수화기와 송화기가 접힐 수 있도록 함
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